I would give it at least ****"s. As I said in my earler post, the novel has some uplifting parts. I did not continually try to associate the characters of the novel with someone I know. No reference of any kind was made to F and G. I agree wtih Jameela that it was "more or less competently written." Much of the fiction that I read today would not measure up to this. I enjoyed it and recommend it. stateliner wrote: Yes Jameela, the book is uplifiting. The characters in the book that "take a stand" for what is right reminds me of some good people I know. Jameela Lares wrote: I downloaded and read this book, partly because I wanted to hear what pseudonyms were assigned to Gary and Frank. But after the first teaser chapter, the story goes in a slightly different direction. The plot is tighter, taking place in far less time than our real-life drama, and the book was more or less competently written. Every now and then I mentally edited the sentence order in a paragraph, and I found one ecclesiastical detail improbable, but otherwise the book was not only a page-turner but ultimately an uplifting and even redemptive experience, which I wasn't expecting. I thought the author did a good job of balancing his characters' desire for revenge?surely bad for anyone's spiritual health?with a wonderful vision of the best of Mississippi, both natural and human. I think that vision is good enough to allow the book to outlive its immediate occasion, and I hope the author does well with sales.
A clarification: when I said I couldn't give it any stars, I didn't mean it didn't MERIT any stars, I meant that none of the "star" categories fit with my evaluation.
And all quibbles aside, I'd be embarrassed for anyone to know how late I stayed up to finish it.
I realize a rating scale may not be an appropriate way to measure any work. After all, it's in the mind of the reader and subject to individual subjectivel interpretation. I too, stayed up late with my copy, to see what happened to the mace.
This would be interesting. I can't contribute until I finish the book. But, "Tailgate Terry", I think I know him. stephen judd wrote: Invictus wrote: Going beyond the obvious & obviously second-guessing Dr. Manly, I propose an extension of this thread to match the names with the names. Recognizing that "This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places, and incidents are the product of the imagination of the author, or are used fictitiously, and any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, business establishments, events, or locales is entirely coincidental," let's list 'em as we thinks they is. And I'll start with: Dr Clyde Folker = Dr Claude Fike
This is a great idea Invictus. I'll lag a little bit -- I decided I actually wanted to get a printed version of the book since I think it will be an excellent "artifact" of the period -- plus I think Dr. Manly deserves a material expression of my thanks for his contribution to keeping the pot stirred. But i hope folks will pick up on this suggestion . . . . inquiring minds want to know.
Did anyone else catch the Bobby Joe Roper description about all the CHAINS involved?
P. 55: "if you took support from Bobby Joe there wer strings attached. The strings were as strong as a chain, and the chain was a symbol of power."
I could also really go into the "favorite son" comment on p. 52, but will, for once, go no further until better minds tell me what I can say about that.
Did anyone else catch the Bobby Joe Roper description about all the CHAINS involved? P. 55: "if you took support from Bobby Joe there wer strings attached. The strings were as strong as a chain, and the chain was a symbol of power." I could also really go into the "favorite son" comment on p. 52, but will, for once, go no further until better minds tell me what I can say about that.
Typing too quickly the "wer" is obviously a "where".
I could also really go into the "favorite son" comment on p. 52, but will, for once, go no further until better minds tell me what I can say about that.
There appears to be too many high school teachers or CoAL faculty on this board. They pay more attention to grammar and punctuation than the content of posts. "I guess to a hammer everything is a nail." Or is that ".... nail". ?
Lest we forget wrote: Surely the Hattiesburg American might be interested in reviewing this novel, or at least writing an article about its existence. I can imagine this becoming the talk of the town. Has anyone yet ordered a copy to know if it is indeed a completed novel rather than simply a work in progress? Has anyone yet contacted Hollywood about selling the movie rights?
I've been waiting to see something about this novel in the HA. I may have missed it. Has anyone seen anything in the HA about this novel?
American Reader wrote: Lest we forget wrote: Surely the Hattiesburg American might be interested in reviewing this novel, or at least writing an article about its existence. I can imagine this becoming the talk of the town. Has anyone yet ordered a copy to know if it is indeed a completed novel rather than simply a work in progress? Has anyone yet contacted Hollywood about selling the movie rights? I've been waiting to see something about this novel in the HA. I may have missed it. Has anyone seen anything in the HA about this novel?
It is my understanding that Rachel Leifer of the HA has requested an interview with Manly about the novel.
Lest we forget wrote: Surely the Hattiesburg American might be interested in reviewing this novel, or at least writing an article about its existence. I can imagine this becoming the talk of the town. Has anyone yet ordered a copy to know if it is indeed a completed novel rather than simply a work in progress? Has anyone yet contacted Hollywood about selling the movie rights? I've been waiting to see something about this novel in the HA. I may have missed it. Has anyone seen anything in the HA about this novel? It is my understanding that Rachel Leifer of the HA has requested an interview with Manly about the novel.
There will never be a review of this novel in the Hattiesburg American. The big guys in the big house will never let it happen.
asdf wrote: Good read wrote: Yes, I do. There are people in the community who would be very interested in this book.
I think if this was a book ready for the bookstore shelves, that would be one thing. As it stands now, it is an interesting first draft of a story.
ASDF, what makes you think it is not ready for the bookstore shelves? It's available, in print, or with a download. Have you read it? Give us your critique.
Scribe On The Coast wrote: ASDF, what makes you think it is not ready for the bookstore shelves? It's available, in print, or with a download. Have you read it? Give us your critique.
Well, I did give my critique, I said it was an interesting first draft. I think LVN described it well about a page earlier.
As for the ready for bookstores, Lulu seems to specialize in single print books rather than large bulk orders for stores. It might be ready if he bought Lulu's Global Distribution Service. I think he should use a professional editor (or a willing English prof) before he attempts selling the book in stores. As it stands now, it reminds me of a well done fanfic that you would find on the internet.
Mr. or Ms. Kicker, could you please not "kick messages up over spam," since the spam will be taken care of in due time, and all that will remain is your empty entries? In fact, I thought you had agreed not to, or was that someone else?
Lest we forget wrote: Surely the Hattiesburg American might be interested in reviewing this novel, or at least writing an article about its existence. I can imagine this becoming the talk of the town. Has anyone yet ordered a copy to know if it is indeed a completed novel rather than simply a work in progress? Has anyone yet contacted Hollywood about selling the movie rights? I've been waiting to see something about this novel in the HA. I may have missed it. Has anyone seen anything in the HA about this novel? It is my understanding that Rachel Leifer of the HA has requested an interview with Manly about the novel.
As Manly's unofficial and and unauthorized agent, I know that ads are coming. The SH will be first on Friday, then HA, the SP, and then others at statewide sources and on a national basis.
The best source for novel at this time is the original site:
I finished the book enjoyed it tremendously. The Mississippi setting and the story told by the author was interesting. The imagination of the author may not match our imiginations. AAOT--Any Actiion On This wrote: This would be interesting. I can't contribute until I finish the book. But, "Tailgate Terry", I think I know him. stephen judd wrote: Invictus wrote: Going beyond the obvious & obviously second-guessing Dr. Manly, I propose an extension of this thread to match the names with the names. Recognizing that "This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places, and incidents are the product of the imagination of the author, or are used fictitiously, and any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, business establishments, events, or locales is entirely coincidental," let's list 'em as we thinks they is. And I'll start with: Dr Clyde Folker = Dr Claude Fike
This is a great idea Invictus. I'll lag a little bit -- I decided I actually wanted to get a printed version of the book since I think it will be an excellent "artifact" of the period -- plus I think Dr. Manly deserves a material expression of my thanks for his contribution to keeping the pot stirred. But i hope folks will pick up on this suggestion . . . . inquiring minds want to know.
Rainmaker wrote: I hear the sales are good feor this novel. For a time sensitive work of this nature I look for a new avenue of distribution before the end of the year.
Thepower group has already shut down the HA crowd and the Rachlel Leifer interview with this author that she had requested. She requested it and then had to run. Power in Hattiesburg and with the HA and USM ruins deep.
Insider Agemt wrote: Rainmaker wrote: I hear the sales are good feor this novel. For a time sensitive work of this nature I look for a new avenue of distribution before the end of the year. Thepower group has already shut down the HA crowd and the Rachlel Leifer interview with this author that she had requested. She requested it and then had to run. Power in Hattiesburg and with the HA and USM ruins deep.
Ane what else is new? We know who holds the power in the in Hattiesburg and at USM.
Thepower group has already shut down the HA crowd and the Rachlel Leifer interview with this author that she had requested. She requested it and then had to run. Power in Hattiesburg and with the HA and USM ruins deep.
Does anyone know if this is actually true? If it is, we are in deeper *** than I thought--and I already thought it was as deep as it could go.