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It’s Fun!

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Haikus for the People
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Complete the Haiku started below or start your own.


 


Here are some guidelines to follow for the uninitiated.


 


Don’t be shy. Jump right in!


 


 


How to write Haiku

In Japanese, the rules for how to write Haiku are clear, and will not be discussed here. In foreign languages, there exist NO consensus in how to write Haiku-poems. Anyway, let's take a look at the basic knowledge:


 


What to write about?

Haiku-poems can describe almost anything, but you seldom find themes which are too complicated for normal people's recognition and understanding. Some of the most thrilling Haiku-poems describe daily situations in a way that gives the reader a brand new experience of a well-known situation.


 


The metrical pattern of Haiku

Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units. In Japanese, this convention is a must, but in English, which has variation in the length of syllables, this can sometimes be difficult.


 


The technique of cutting

The cutting divides the Haiku into two parts, with a certain imaginative distance between the two sections, but the two sections must remain, to a degree, independent of each other. Both sections must enrich the understanding of the other.
To make this cutting in English, either the first or the second line ends normally with a colon, long dash or ellipsis.


 


The seasonal theme


Each Haiku must contain a kigo, a season word, which indicate in which season the Haiku is set. For example, cherry blossoms indicate spring, snow indicate winter, and mosquitoes indicate summer, but the season word isn't always that obvious.


Please notice that Haiku-poems are written under different rules and in many languages. For translated Haiku-poems, the translator must decide whether he should obey the rules strictly, or if he should present the exact essence of the Haiku. For Haiku-poems originally written in English, the poet should be more careful. These are the difficulties, and the pleasure of Haiku.


 


http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/


 


 


 


Let’s start the first Haiku with the five syllables: A Shady Lady

 


Complete the Haiku with lines of 7 and 5 syllables.


 


So, let’s begin:


 


A Shady Lady



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The Seven Syllables

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"Complete the Haiku started below or start your own.  . .   Let’s start the first Haiku with the five syllables: A Shady Lady   Complete the Haiku with lines of 7 and 5 syllables.   So, let’s begin:   A Shady Lady"


A Shady Lady


With a cabal of close friends



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Haikee

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Originally posted by: The Seven Syllables

" A Shady Lady With a cabal of close friends"


A Shady Lady


With a cabal of close friends


Slowly losing grip



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foot soldier

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President Thames laughs.

He is still having great fun.

USM suffers.

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Neal Jung

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Weep, roses of spring.


Beneath once shining copper


Now putrescence seethes.



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Haiku U.

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March Gary and Frank


Professors heads above gnomes


Tears for tiers ignored



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Take a hike, you

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My University -


Once budding, blooming lushly.


Now withered and sad.


 



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